Kia ora! I am a Year 6 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
It looks like you've read a lot of stories about refugees. If New Zealand suddenly became unsafe to live in, which country do you think would help us if we became refugees? You could make your slides more engaging by using different colours, fonts and pictures.
Hi Michael Tabby here, your work is great. You added loads of detail to the graph and set it out well and made it easy to read and it was clear information. Maybe next time you could add a picture or add more detail to the first slide? Keep up the good work!
Kia ora Michael, You've put in a lot of effort, filling in your Reading response table, ka pai! It shows you read many stories and articles about refugees and this has helped me to see what you learned. Your reading response table could be better than before (btb) with proofreading for spelling and punctuation. Keep up the good effort, Ka mau te wehi! Ms Peters.
Kia ora Michael,
ReplyDeleteIt looks like you've read a lot of stories about refugees. If New Zealand suddenly became unsafe to live in, which country do you think would help us if we became refugees? You could make your slides more engaging by using different colours, fonts and pictures.
Hi Michael Tabby here, your work is great. You added loads of detail to the graph and set it out well and made it easy to read and it was clear information. Maybe next time you could add a picture or add more detail to the first slide? Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Michael,
ReplyDeleteYou've put in a lot of effort, filling in your Reading response table, ka pai! It shows you read many stories and articles about refugees and this has helped me to see what you learned. Your reading response table could be better than before (btb) with proofreading for spelling and punctuation. Keep up the good effort, Ka mau te wehi! Ms Peters.